Practice attaching words to feelings requires time to do.
Without a system that helps you monitor that time, the minutes
or hours could feel unproductive. With the right exercise, you
can then use that time wisely, as well as save you time and
frustration.
Learning to apply the right words to our six senses is a top
ingredient to the mixture of writing. Its language brings the
reader into the story. All of us easily know how we feel, or
what we’re seeing (okay, most of the time), what we’re hearing,
smelling, tasting, and sensing, and can usually explain it in 50
words if pushed to do it. But, how do you describe it in one or
two words without the pushing?
Also, by beginning with good material, the remaining part of the
writing process becomes easier. This exercise will help you
improve your beginning.
This is a simple exercise that you can do anywhere, anytime, in
a space of minutes or longer. You can practice Monday mornings
in the garden, the doctor’s waiting room, or in the lunchroom.
It can last as long as a television commercial (oops those
aren’t short any longer), or you more aggressively with a
devoted 30-minutes a day. Whatever length of time or place you
have, it will always improve your skill.
You will want to sit while completing this exercise.
Okay, let’s start with the most difficult spot, your supplies –
paper and your writing instruments. Landscape, portrait, small,
or regular size sheet of paper doesn’t matter. I define what
paper size to use by the amount of time available and my
location. If I’m mobile, I use my small journal. If I’m at my
desk or at home, I use a regular size paper. Sometimes lines,
sometimes not. Sometimes the exercise flows over to two or three
sheets. Don’t limit the experience by paper size. Have fun with
the recording tools as well. Experimentation is the key to our
curiosity. And, curiosity is the foundation of a writer.
Draw a circle on the page and place your name in the center.
Large, small, in color, black, or blue, again it doesn’t matter.
Use whatever flips your pancakes at that moment. In other words,
whatever feels good at the time.
Your objective is to describe your five senses, six if you have
that gift, with words. Write the words that express that sense
in the space inside the circle randomly around your name.
Here is how you would use this exercise to increase environment
awareness and description. Write your words in the location on
the paper relevant to the direction it appears. For example: I’m
sitting outside my office on a 9th floor balcony at the moment,
I hear a heavy humming from the tires on the wet pavement below
and birds chirping above me to the right. I would place the
words for the tires on the bottom left and the chirping on the
upper right on my page.
Here are nine prompts to help you expand your experience. *
Write words describing your atmosphere–the quality of air. *
What are the clouds doing? Can you see animals in their shapes?
* The temperature of your location. * The source of light and
its quality. * Where are people standing or sitting? * Shadows,
are they’re any? Where and how do they fall? * Predominant
colors, wall colors, wallpaper, molding, chair railing, textured
ceiling. * What do you smell? Using comparisons are a great way
to relate to your reader. The air feels like just getting out of
the fogged shower stall. * Are there other people around you?
How do they smell, their clothes, their shoes? Guess at what
they might do for a living. Are they dressed like someone on
their way to work, doesn’t work, a mom, dad, baker, or what?
After you are comfortable describing your environment, spice the
exercise up another notch. Compare your descriptive words to
something else. For example: The room you are sitting in feels
like a sauna with my clothes on.
Continue spicing up the exercise to increase your awareness and
descriptive powers–use people and objects. Since you are most
familiar with yourself, begin there.
After practicing on the most familiar subject, yourself, create
a list of other familiar people in your life. Then sort the list
from most familiar to least. Continue down the list. Somewhere
during these lists and practice sessions, you will begin to feel
comfortable with your skill.
You can continue taking the exercise to another level. This time
you are ready to expand your awareness and adaptation to words.
Visit the local mall; sit in the food court for smorgasbord of
new enriching thoughts-to-words experiences.
Here are 11 prompts to help you expand your levels: * Describe
what you are wearing. * How does your body feel? * What are your
hands doing? * How does your throat feel? * How are you holding
your mouth? * Eye movement * Breathing * How do you feel in
general, in detail? * Name your mood. Does it have a flavor and
color? * Describe your feelings with reference to music. A
certain song or type of music. * How does your hair smell,
clothes, the chair you’re sitting on, the book you’re reading?
Be patient with yourself while practicing. This exercise isn’t
the easiest to complete, however, it is the most effective. Even
if you aren’t a writer, this exercise will help you triple your
awareness skills in a short time period1. This exercise also
helps police officers, speakers, judges, attorneys, or anyone
else that uses their awareness skills to see and put it into
words. This is also a NLP–neurolinguistics programming
skill–for those aware of this process.